- What did you like about the way we shared our stories?
- What would you like to do differently next time?
- How did you feel about sharing your personal story in front of others (were you excited, shy, nervous, not affected at all) and why?
We have our Personal Narrative Publishing Party on Friday, December 3. After the party, I want you to reflect. Be sure to answer all the questions, but I encourage you to add more information and give me lots of details so you're expressing yourself clearly.
26 Comments
Bona
12/4/2010 03:10:02 am
I liked when some of my friends were adding emotions in their stories.
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Bryan
12/5/2010 07:56:43 am
I liked the way people shared their story because most people had different feeling in their storys.
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Mara
12/5/2010 08:25:45 am
Something I liked about how we shared our stories is how we got to go up in the spotlight and know everyone was listening.Next time I would try to write about a more emotional moment and make my story a little longer.I was very excited about sharing my story but I definently had butterflys in my stomach.
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Mrs. Wever
12/5/2010 09:16:19 am
I am so proud of everyone who remembered to post this weekend! You all answered all 3 questions and gave me an idea of how you felt. It's great to reflect after you do something so you can learn what went well and what you can improve on for next time. Great comments!
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Q.1 I loved how we got up and wasn't shy about reading our stories in our classroom.Q.2 I think next time I'll make my story longer,because when I was ending my story nobody claped for me because the story was so long.Q.3 I was shy and excited at the same time like my dad is hungy and sleep at the same time
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katelyn
12/6/2010 12:17:21 am
next time i would like to have Heather food. and open the wall so its just one big room. i was not very nurvos about saying my storie out loud .i liked the way that evryone was listing to the person speking. the waters and waterses were good also. i love the way the room was set up.
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Nhan
12/6/2010 12:18:55 am
I like to hear about people tell what happen in their stories. I would like to write my story longer next time. I was nervous when I shared my story in front of the class.
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I loved the cafe it5 was fun and exiting I was exited about sharing my story because I felt that I worked hard on my story. Some things I would change is if we play music next time while we are listening to it online also you should stop playing one of them. I liked sharing our stories the way both our rooms did it because all of the people were quiet and respectful when someone else was sharing.
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miles
12/6/2010 12:22:20 am
I like how we got a tall stool that we sit on to share our stories. Next time I hope we have sushi,ginger,& wasabe. I felt exited when I shared my story because its fun!
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nagham
12/6/2010 12:23:58 am
I think some stories are cool. I would change the food because there was no fruit. I was really happy and nervous.
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Mar,mar
12/6/2010 12:25:58 am
Last night I forgot to mention that I don't think we should add any vegtables
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William
12/6/2010 12:27:03 am
I liked the fluency I did,but a little fuzzy.
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Elijah
12/6/2010 12:30:05 am
I think all of the writing was fine. I would change the writing because there was not that much detail .
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nitaawe
12/6/2010 12:30:59 am
I liked the way we shared our stories because we got TREATS!!!I don't think we should do anything different next time.I felt exited about it because we could just hang around,eat,and listen to people's stories.
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Lydia
12/6/2010 12:31:56 am
I liked the way we shared because we got to sit up in front of the whole class and read.I would like more Healthy food because we were crazy after the cafe.I felt Nervous because there was a lot of people in front of me.
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Nagham
12/6/2010 12:32:52 am
I was happy and nervous because everyone was staring at me. Everyone liked my story.
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I liked sharing our stories. I was exited to share our stories because I felt like I had worked so hard on my story. Some things you could change is if you want to play live music and Pandora don't play them at the same time. The thing i like about the way we shared our stories is that we waited until everyone was quiet and respectful before someone was about to share.
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Mrs. Boylan
12/6/2010 12:33:09 am
I was impressed that 4th graders had so many unique stories! What creative minds! Next time I'm sure you will all be less nervous because of your first experience.
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Mrs. Bungard
12/6/2010 12:34:11 am
Hello students!
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Rinoa
12/6/2010 12:37:02 am
I liked how my friends did their movemen
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Andrew
12/6/2010 12:41:24 am
I really liked the way we shared our stories they were awesome. I also liked the treats THEY WERE GOOD!!.My favorite one was the doughnuts they were sweet. One thing I think we could change is not so many sweets. I felt like a sugur rocket.Last but not least I was a little scared to share my story in front of alot of people because I have stage fright.
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David
12/6/2010 12:42:39 am
I liked people read their story.
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Fiz,Fiz
12/6/2010 12:48:08 am
I like the way how the backround of a fire looked when people were sharing.
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Kristen
12/6/2010 12:51:41 am
Dear Mrs.Wever when we shared our stories I felt scared becuase I thought people would laugh at my story.
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Mrs. Wever
12/6/2010 09:37:02 am
Overall, I'm noticing that we definitely need a healthier menu next time. I'm so glad to hear you all say that! I totally agree. When our class makes the plans, we can also plan what to eat.
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Nitaawe
12/10/2010 09:31:18 am
I think the music was fun (both kinds)!
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